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The onset of penetrative strainn metamorphism is marked by a rapid elimination of poorly-oriented clastic micas in favour of numerous smaler different composition grains. |
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The onset of penetrative strain |
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The onset of penetrative strain metamorphism is marked by the rapid elimination of poorly oriented clastic micas in favour of numerous smaller grains [Or do you mean 'crystals'? If so, please replace.] of contrasting composition. |



